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I find it surprising and interesting that Evan and David kept correspondence with each other. And I thought there would be some evisceration involved, but that was actually very civil.

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Wow, that was something else! No sex, yet the chapter was both enticing and erotic. The fact that the Cuck and Bottom Bull became aquatinted via correspondence was a twist I didn't see coming. Well played, sir.

A few things!

I feel like this chapter and the previous one could have been combined. Those of us that read TLOBB already knew that Henderson would be in Evan's office and those that didn't read wouldn't get the significance. The ending of this chapter is a much better cliffhanger, however.

I liked Henderson's confession. It felt very on point for his character. The honesty between him and Evan was also nice.Their rapport was the best part.

I too want to know what Henderson whispered into Mike's neck during the video. I don't suppose you remember?

Looking forward to chapter 4!

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