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Zach Holliday's avatar

Excellent, excellent, excellent. Super strong character development across the board. Leonardo is the perfect villain and I, like Ethan, am drawn in even though there’s significant danger there. And sweet, naive Danny - I actually care about what happens to him and feel what’s on the horizon might not be good. You nailed it, Jack. I’m hooked.

JRS's avatar

This was a very intriguing start to another new story Jack..

I'd be lying if I said that Ethan did not loose a few popularity points with me after his hot fantasy with Leonardo that did not include Danny in the slightest.. You know the Danny that Ethan professes to be the love of his life..

This story is going to be very hard on me.. I can see it already..

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